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Re: From The Arms of Our Fathers
Hello! I'm not very good with these critiques. But, I really loved this! I wish there was a way to hear the songs with music or with someone singing it. ...
Feb 18, 2010 -
Re: :DGood Morning Sun
Hello! I though this was such a happy poem. For the record it may not have made me laugh out loud, but it did make me smile :D Not much ...
Feb 13, 2010 -
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Hi The critic before me already talked about grammar problems (which is good because I'm not very good at correcting grammar). However, I do agree with him or her in ...
Feb 13, 2010 -
Re: The Boy Who Thought He Was a Tree
Wow. That was really great. It had such an apathetic (creepy) tone but it carried soooo much emotion. Seriously I loved it. It gave me chills. I'm trying to wrap ...
Feb 13, 2010 -
Re: Fission - [Edited]
Wow. This is very intriguing. I like how the prologue is told from an unusual point of view. I'm not exactly sure who (or what) is telling this story. This ...
Nov 26, 2009
